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getaway driver

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:30 am
by helkensinken
Chapter 1:

chicago, Illinois: 1985.

nicolas receives a phone call from a gang asking for it to be the getaway driver
of them:

-nicolas: how much do you pay me?

-gang: 100 dollars.

-nicolas: ok

-gang: what car do you have?

-nicolas: ford corcel gt

gang: ok.

call ends.

so is everything that was agreed but on the trail a police car hit head-on in
nicolas's car and the police arrested they .

15 days after:
nicolas see by prison window of his car restored ready
be auctioned as nicolas saw opportunity and dug a hole until his car
entered in it and fled the prison. ...

continues in Chapter 2 ...

Sorry for my bad English.

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:53 am
by PostalDude
LOL

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 11:11 am
by Olanov
Wat

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:37 am
by Badnick24
Olanov wrote:Wat
This

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 1:32 am
by helkensinken
that and a compliment or a correction? because if they are making fun of my face
go though here!!!!! :x

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 3:03 am
by PostalDude
driverever110 wrote:that and a compliment or a correction? because if they are making fun of my face
go though here!!!!! :x
LOL

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:03 am
by max.thunder
driverever110 wrote:Chapter 1:

chicago, Illinois: 1985.

nicolas receives a phone call from a gang asking for it to be the getaway driver
of them:

-nicolas: how much do you pay me?

-gang: 100 dollars.

-nicolas: ok

-gang: what car do you have?

-nicolas: dodge St. regis 1980 modified with 500hp

-gang: ok.

call ends.

so is everything that was agreed but on the trail a police car hit head-on in
nicolas car and the police arrested they .

15 days after:
nicolas see by prison window of his car restored ready
be auctioned as nicolas saw opportunity and dug a hole until his car
entered in it and fled the prison. ...

continues in Chapter 2 ...

Sorry for my bad English.
That car must be uncontrollable, way too much power.

You should have posted that here.

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:30 am
by Coyote
Absolutely, the car is so weakly built that with an engine of this power, the whole frame and chassis would most likely get bent and twisted :)

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:01 am
by PostalDude
This driverever110 guy is pants-on-head-retarded. God knows why he came back after getting banned.

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:13 am
by helkensinken
Coyote wrote:Absolutely, the car is so weakly built that with an engine of this power, the whole frame and chassis would most likely get bent and twisted :)

see correction in Chapter 1 in the top of the page

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:23 am
by Coyote
driverever110 wrote:
Coyote wrote:Absolutely, the car is so weakly built that with an engine of this power, the whole frame and chassis would most likely get bent and twisted :)

see correction in Chapter 1 in the top of the page
Even with 300 hp this car would be torn to shreds :D Except if it was maybe heavily modified with the frame and chassis reinforced.

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:30 am
by helkensinken
correct the car was heavily modified but without removing the original visual (in other words the
original car looks without looking the engine.) :D

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:41 am
by Coyote
Wow okay well that must have cost a lot of money then, I mean these mods probably cost 10 times as much as the car, but the dude must be really dumb I guess :P Weird also that it’s supercharged, you don’t hear of many supercharged V8’s that do 300 hp, usually they’re supercharged to attain a power output of 400 or 500 hp, but not 300 :P

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:44 am
by helkensinken
Coyote wrote:Wow okay well that must have cost a lot of money then, I mean these mods probably cost 10 times as much as the car, but the dude must be really dumb I guess :P Weird also that it’s supercharged, you don’t hear of many supercharged V8’s, usually they’re supercharged to attain a power output of 400 or 500 hp, but not 300 :P
see correction in Chapter 1 in the top of the page :roll:

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:03 am
by Coyote
But then we come to the problem again that this car would be blown into pieces as soon as you would rev the engine, plus it seems to be even more major work now since the engine is even more powerful :P And even more expensive. Very strange story :P

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:08 am
by helkensinken
Coyote wrote:But then we come to the problem again that this car would be blown into pieces as soon as you would rev the engine, plus it seems to be even more major work now since the engine is even more powerful :P And even more expensive. Very strange story :P
see correction in Chapter 1 in the top of the page :| :? :roll: :o :shock:

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:26 pm
by Coyote
I don’t like the story :(

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:57 pm
by Steerclear
Coyote wrote:I don’t like the story :(
Laughed when I saw this and Olanovs 'Wat'

This doesn't need a Chapter 2, he fled the prison...the end.

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:35 am
by Olanov
driverever110 wrote:nicolas car
Alright, I'm slightly confused here. Is the car's name Nicloas? Nicolas car? Y'know? Is this like, a sequel to Cars?

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 12:52 am
by Badnick24
driverever110 wrote:see correction in Chapter 1 in the top of the page :| :? :roll: :o :shock:
Image

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:02 am
by PostalDude
Olanov wrote:
driverever110 wrote:nicolas car
Alright, I'm slightly confused here. Is the car's namce Nicloas? Nicolas car? Y'know? Is this like, a sequel to Cars?
TOP LEL

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:06 am
by helkensinken
Olanov wrote:
driverever110 wrote:nicolas car
Alright, I'm slightly confused here. Is the car's namce Nicloas? Nicolas car? Y'know? Is this like, a sequel to Cars?
the car is of nicolas. because I messed up at the time of writing the phrase nicolas's car and I ended up writing nicolas car thanks for the correction :)

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:10 am
by PostalDude
The car is a part of him? What?

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 1:24 am
by helkensinken
PostalDude wrote:The car is a part of him? What?

Yes, it is part of him. because he devoted himself in the car (in car restoration in 1982).

and a easter egg in Chapter 1: nicolas is me. that is my real name is nicolas
and I do birthday tomorrow of 13 years old

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 2:06 am
by Coyote
driverever110 wrote:and I do birthday tomorrow of 13 years old
I know ;)

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 3:17 am
by helkensinken
Chapter 2:

nicolas: that sh*t of Russian this behind me these motherf**ker will die!

Russian: this son of b*t*ch knocked on my car I kill it

nicolas of a rifle shot in Russian car that ends up losing control and hitting a tree.
and nicolas flees into hiding spot and return the plates of his car and his clothes. and there
learns that viny alive. resolves after doing work for him: that is taking a rift with felipe to prove your worth to viny and ends up destroying the car of felipe felipe and tries to kill him but it took a rifle shot in the head and died.

nicolas: tried kill me die.

and nicolas account when viny what happened with felipe.
and vin passes respect nicolas and more work to it.

continues in Chapter 3 ...

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 4:45 am
by Olanov
Image

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:18 am
by helkensinken
Olanov wrote:Image
wtf

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:24 am
by Coyote
driverever110 wrote:wtf
Don’t worry, you haven’t done anything wrong :P Some members believe that you behave weirdly, but I can assure you, when I was your age I behaved even weirder than you on the internet :lol: It’s normal I guess. But be careful, the internet isn’t a safe place and don’t take everything people say serious :)

Re: getaway driver

Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:39 am
by Olanov
driverever110 wrote:wtf
My thoughts exactly.